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2006.04.20 Describing an accident
今日は「Describing an accident」。
起こった出来事を時制を意識して表現する……といった問題です。
テーマは「My worst day」。
いっぱい赤で修正されちゃいました。

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My worst day

Have you ever been late to your job interview?

When I was a college student, I did job hunting hard job hunted a lot. One rainy day, I left for a job interview with plenty of time to catch the train. On arriving at the station which is was the nearest a to the company, it started to rained heavily and my clothes was becoming became wet wet and dirty by in the 10 minutes ten-minute walks. I think I was might have looked like a quite shabby and like a poor girl at that time. Since in the area which I have never been before was new to me, I wandered around there for looking for the company for a while, but I couldn’t get find it. I checked the company address again…I noticed that I had got off short of at the wrong station. “NOOOOO!!!!” I shouted unsubconsciously on the high street. I took a taxi hastily and I arrived at the company but it is was all over.

Eventually In the end I couldn’t work in the company which I was interested in very much. It was very a shame and then I have checked companys’ address carefully and brought took an umbrella anytime for interviews since it was happened everytime I went for interview.

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job huntingは動詞にもなることを初めて知りました。
それにしても今日は赤が多かったぁ。
Writingもちゃんとやらないと……
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